by Kyrima
Your lack of grammar, sentence and paragraph structure spoiled the good idea you had.
Ultimately a waste of time reading it!
I liked when her son crushed her nipples with a nutcracker. Ouch! Mommy, fuck me in mein arse. Do me, Granny.
Loved this story and got my cock so hard. I hope you write more and very soon.
Please Continue to write more, Wonder if Anna is going to fully turn (Jace) into Eve for good. Want to see more chapters with the next posting.
Jesus that got me hard in my knicks! Wonderfull, wonderfull turn on. Can i be Eve please Mummy Anna!!! xx
I wish I could've been caught like that when I was a teen and dressing..
Diane
Usually I dont like the guy on guy thing, but this story really worked for me. Great story, short but sweet. Another chapter please. I need more of Eve
What was the point of making this incest? It ends up going too hard, too fast for it to have any sort of meaning. There's no context, no reason behind their actions, no clue why the rating is so high.
Very creative way to leave certain elements up to the reader's imagination. Well done.