All Comments on 'Anna's Song'

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O.K. on to the real stuff. I really enjoyed the story. It was well thought out and very well written. I'm going to make it one my favorites and send a link to a couple of my friends. Now I'm off to read your other submissions. You done good.

Mike

The opening scene in the pub with the fat, greasy guy really repelled me as intended. The author deserves praise for avoiding making it romantic or delightful. Still couldn't enjoy the story. Just too disgusting. When our heroine decides to opt in, I had to opt out.

Good work Otters.