All Comments on 'Anne & Jack'

You sir did it again! You delivered a story full of emotions, compassion, drama, mental challenges, real-life issues, tough decisions and love conquering all. Guess you could say that falling for your brother runs in the family :)

While this means that the Amy & Jack route is no longer possible I'm convinced you made the best possible decision given the situation of the characters involved.

I do have some questions though:

- what do you mean some thing that weren't mentioned in Jake & Jessica Ch. 07 - you only posted 6 chapters so far?

- will this be the only instalment in this spin-off?

- how will this make it back to the Jake and Jessica main storyline?

- Are there other planned spin-offs for other characters?

As always your work deserves more than 5* but I can't give it so 5 it is!

This story was amazing I loved the ending If becomes the Jake and Jessica I would gladly read it...

Very good story, i like your writing..

keep it up, i'll read it all !

It's not"Me and Jack". It's "Jack and I" or "Jack and me". Really annoying. Also found it hard to follow the story with character names so similar. 3* for effort.

I have enjoyed both stories very much, and would like to continue reading more chapters of both. Another 5 stars for this story too.

Was OK till it got stupid. He kissed her, apologized next day...let's fuck??? Then magic, he strips...takes her blouse and bra off. Without removing the rest of her clothes they just fuck anyway. Blowing off kids was the killer for me. barely a star