All Comments on 'Anne the Daughter'

More thanks

please 😊

Great story. I don't know where you plan to go with this story, but something that includes both characters together, and story lines of both of them separately would be great.

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I suspect that we are about the same age and with the same hangups. Lovely story tell us more

nice but in todays world it is so easy to yell rape when the girls get mad

when you part . after sex you have to get along . one of you calls it quits and

BS happens. nice flash tale, what was her name?

Well done, I want more!

Loved the story.

She is a guys dream.

Beautiful and wanting to fuck

I'm seeing the same bad habits in this story that are frequent on this site: DESCRIBE WHAT THE CHARACTERS LOOK LIKE! Don't just say, "She's gorgeous!" HOW is she "gorgeous"? Her hair color, style, length, face shape, body shape, figure (besides simply having big tits). Waaaay too many authors have a mental picture of their characters, but forget to actually translate said mental picture to the page.

Well written, and full of nasty dirty words ya...

I agree with a previous Anonymous commenter. Your story is very good...worthy of 4 stars. But descriptions are far too vague. One of the guys I met in a bar described me as a young Goldie Hawn. That got him enough dates to get the prize. Descriptions are important.

Good quick story. I have only a brief idea of what he looks like and the only thing I know about her looks is she isn't ugly. But I love her sense of humor and outlook. I'm satisfied and don't need more descriptions for something of this size.

Thanks

I wish the stories were longer and what happened to grand, mother and his two sisters? I felt you could of had a number of chapters on Alex's family. 5 stars any way.