All Comments on 'Anne the Model'

i loved your story, so much i jacked of then read it again and j/o again

Had me hard from the start. Very erotic story. My wife is hoping one of our friends wants her to pose for him and I'm all for it.

Another slut wife/wimpy husband story. Of course we needed more stories like this to make our job of finding quality stories harder. Why would any husband let the photographer TOUCH her, let alone have sex with her? They need marriage counselling the instant she asked her husband to let her have sex with the guy! The best stories are believable. In the loving wives category, that means consequences: usually either divorce or a hard time of reconcilliation. I'll give you another chance before I ignore your postings.

Great, sexy story. Well written. I say to each their own about John sharing his wife.

This story is not the type we would normally read, however, my wife is wet I have a hardon so if you write stories to turn people on you've done your job well.

Wow! Very hot story! My cock was hard from the beginning - when I asked my wife to join me, I had trouble keeping her away from it - I just knew I'd cum all over the keyboard. She got so wet while I fingered her, she almost came. But I made her wait until the end so we could enjoy each other's orgasms. Sharing my wife with another guy is one of our favorite fantasies!

Very nice writing style - thanks!

Nick and Tanya

Action is a slow seduction. Hate for the wife to become a slut but you know adultry is catching. Once you have it, you have it for life.

Prose was great. Enjoyed how you took your time to build the story. The build up is more important than the sex in a great erotic story.

Anyone can write a story with a cock cumming every three lines But a good story needs a build up o the sex,

The build-up was fairly slow but lacked sufficient description of what Anne was showing while she was posing and didn't go into her feelings as she was revealing herself. The other problem I had with the story is that Anne hasn't seen her husband in months yet her first act of intercourse is with Bob, the photographer. This just isn't credible.<P>The story was pretty well written, the dialogue was good and the theme of photographing a woman in 'naughty' poses is very popular. The author did a nice job with the story other than the exceptions noted above.

1*

only has a single working brain cell, hence the 1*

only has a single working brain cell, hence the 1*

Great story.

Nice story... good pacing and lead up... would love to read more

But each from their own homes each wondering what their lives would have been like if the were still a couple.

She has a right mouth as well as a tight ass. The perfect whore.

Cucks like pictures of their whores too.