All Comments on 'Anne's Ambition'

This is a fantastic story which is well written. I've enjoyed all your tales and find that you get better with each one. thanks for writing and sharing. Can't wait for the next part.

And her "business decision" (which in her case translates to extreme selfishness) may put her marriage, her compartmentalized life, at risk. Luke has her personal info which she tried to keep from him; it will be interesting how he takes it from here. The most obvious (and well-worn) method would be blackmail. What always mystifies me are the rationalizations people make to justify cheating. Why not dress up for Hubby, seduce him, tell him twice a week is not enough? He'd probably rise to the "challenge" given half a chance.

But no, it wouldn't equal the thrill, the newness, of cheating with multiple partners. Such people as this svelt business woman forget the Golden Rule . . . Do unto others and so forth. How much love would she think her husband has for her if he were to cheat on her? I doubt she'd like it. Which brings me back to the premise that she is selfish, supremely so in fact. I say all this as an observation, not moralization. Marriage is supposed to be a partnership of equals; extra partners for her is far from equality in the marriage. I'm curious how the author plans to proceed with this and if it will be original.

atypical of TQM .

The points at the beginning were too funny. You were kidding, right? I mean, who is that insecure to have to write out a list of reading dos and don'ts.

Right?

Second, her decision to cheat is one thing is one thing; but her disrespect of her husband is another. After putting her husband down for three nights, how do you expect that she will still love him? Everyone is imperfect, we all have flaws and if we focus on them, like she did, eventually, all she would see is his flaws.

As a smart business woman, she should cut her losses and file for divorce. After all, she is smart enough to recognize that they have no future together, so why prolong it?

This was akin to 'Psycho',insofar the multiple role turnabouts and the uber-detached 3rd person POV mode of storytelling. In terms of setting a hook into the readers and compelling them to finish, the author did a nigh immaculate job.

My one qualm is that I don't understand why Luke would find Anne that special. He would seem to have most of the Lone Star feminine populace with an itch at his disposal. Is he a' psycho' ? Outside of that quibble , TQM has written a veritable, formalist anti-eulogy to the seven year itch.

The view is bleak & unsparing of none of its characters. There are stark overtones of a ruthless honesty that TQM's haters can no more resist then his fans. Count me in the latter demographic, please. Full marks.

hehehe,, TQM you're such one afraid fuck'in pussy wimp of a man to make a piece of bullshit list in the beginning,,i didn't even bother reading your pathetic story and go straight to comment on how pussy you are,,PUSSY!! go back inside the closet pussy...

Seven pages, no chapter # to warn this wasn't a complete story, and IT'S NOT DONE? Shit like this ALWAYS earns a rating of 1.

as interesting as a telephone book. wow excellent. anybody who reads on about a stupid sad tale is an idiot. me included , reading all 7 pages waiting......

7 pages ? Can't be arsed !

Seven fucking pages to tell Anne is a slut .............

Congratulations

You get a # 1 for taking the time to post

Do us a favor don't waste our time, keep your stories to your self

... and ignore anonymous trolls.

This is a new low in boredom! Way too long a story to establish the fact that anne is a slut. A masterclass in boredom that is highly recommended to anyone whose not able to sleep!!!

up, down around the world. TK U MLJ LV NV

Oh please, spare us

Your knowledge of normal wouldn't fill a thimble

Saved me from reading it. Please don't read or respond to my story unless you like it. Pretty stupid and just a bit insecure wouldn't you say?

Go Fuck yourself.

1* no read

Just another BS story of a cheating slut. So what if you don't want comments. You post it, expect readers to comment. Good or bad. Preamble notwithstanding.

So much was wrong in her actions that defy words. Can she spell divorce? Luke is going to try to claim her. Her husband is going to surprise both of them. Have fun paying alimony and child support as an unemployed adulteress. Luke can have fun working out a settlement for alienation of affection.

Why is it that writers make the assumption when a wife cheats, her boy toy thinks the husband is a wimp? What's up with that? There was no indication that he was and she knew what she was going to do / doing that if caught her marriage is over.

1 star for your preamble. If you don't like the comments, don't post the story.

didn't read it me because you make me sick and lefreak because anything over one line would put the sick fuck asleep.

i totally missed the preamble, would have saved me the 15 min I wasted reading this.

Great set up. Now what happens when the desire to continue is out of control?

The first few pages dealing her rationalization and transformation were riveting. The rest of the story followed suit. I admit to skimming a little over the repetitive parts. You often go over the same thinking several times, but maybe that's just me.

I enjoyed the story. I enjoyed the stark honesty of Anne's thinking. And I look forward to the next chapter.

I give the preamble a 1. Have no idea about the rest of the story as I was told not to read it.

Fuck you!!!!

They're merely infuriated at a reasonable warning so they can't pretend to be "shocked, shocked "( like cop in Casablanca) at content. Trolls will seize upon the slightest opportunity to be themselves.

You've written something beautiful in terms of ruthless honesty and because they cannot even dream of conceptualizing their vision- you must be dragged to their level so they can feel bigger. Trolls can't handle the truth or any semblance thereof. Pity.

the idea that as an author you EXPECT or demand that all readers ONLY post hat YOU want them to post ... means that we -- TQM and harry in VA have an issue.

from many years I have given a lot ..not all -of your stores high marks. Now we all find out you a god damn stupid fascist ...sort of like the slope head red neck tea party turds.

Its war.

if the wife is going to cheat for her business career... thats one thing. Its awful and it will come bail to hurt hurt BUT ...well its happens

she does not HAVE to shit on her husband.

**The story FAILS because you do not explain WHY the wife feels compelled to to shit on him **

I have to admit that you have some interesting ideas. The idea that she could do something like this without danger of backwash just does not work in the World Village we are in. Basically what was proven here is that she did not work out all the angles before starting. She just might deserve to lose her Mrs. and her VP for these errors.

The Preamble was a great provocation of the Trolls. I almost fell of my chair laughing. Why would they want to read or vote on something they know they will not like?

Life is too short.

Because this is so true to life. Wonder how many times this has happened and will happen in real life?

Although there IS dialogue, the tale is mostly narrative. I issue my personal GOOJ card -get out of jail (or gaol, if one must)- for that editorial choice...it was done well!

Relentless, cold logic! Until Sweetie's pussy demanded the 'safe' bet of two more nights of fantastic known sex, rather than risk less-satisfactory picks. The whole issue of STDs puts a HUGE lie to the adequacy of her planning! The only process which might be STD-riskier than young-adult meat markets would be for Sweetie to go out and share needles with street dopers!

One other quibble...he spent three nights in her room, and they took separate showers (and other bathroom necessities)! Why not just look in her purse for details? Or look at her conference name-tag as she left for her meetings?

Verbose, in need of editing, and sad.

Your preamble is very defensive, you are not looking for negative comments. You had to know this would bring them in spades.

She is supposed to be a very intelligent woman, but goes all slut on us. Didnt she have to get up in the morning to perform at a high level? Most large corporations run their VP's ragged.

No remorse,no second thoughts, she just fucked away the night. Not realistic, so not what we are looking for in Loving Wives category. We are looking for life like psychological insights into how cheating starts, is consumated, and is resolved.

Have read your other stuff, usually pretty good, but this is a solid 3. Very average.

She is so smart, so calculating and business oriented (efficient) that she takes not one but several loads internally with no condom. Be tough explaining the STD if the old man gets infected.....

but much too long. The stage could have been set in 3 pages, 4 at the most...

I understand u consider whores, women that get paid and/or benefits for sex, as ok despite the risk, including medical, that the place their spouses in without their knowledge or consent. That's great as long as u are the one that gets AIDS or the other gifts that keep giving from her.

There is nobody to like, you feel bad for her family but its all bullshit inside your head, not a very nice place to be. No thanks.

Take your fucking story and stick it up you slimmy fucking shit hole you piece of rotten shit.

Well written, very sexy, and good character development. This is an excellent start to a story!

so many authors seem to have such a low opinion of women on this site.. and certainly no real understanding. It seems the the authors, and I'm thinking maybe most of the readers here are middle aged loser with no sex lives.

Sorry. This story fails to develop any interest. The heroine has such a high opinion of her own acumen that one can instantly see she is headed for a major fall. Unfortunately the reader is given no reason to care.

and sues her company for really big bucks and divorces her asss and also posts oictures videos and her addressd and phone number all over the internet...with evidence he can sue get rich and never have to work again...then use the money to find and fuck a whole platoon of women he should also get the kids and make her pay child support qa slut like her does not deserve kids

While I loath this scenario, it is all too common.

Your story is pretty well presented. We come to understand the calculating, some might say cold way Anne came to adultery. We come to see her for who she is. And we come to the inescapable conclusion that she's screwing up the best things she ever had, because she lost track of herself in the ego trip of business-place come-ons.

Many, many stories paint it as a drive, a need or an emotional blow out.

This is more often what I've seen.

But, like too often in the real world, it all comes home to roost eventually and the decision, however businesslike, is still dishonest, disloyal and a serious betrayal.

That's why they call it cheating.

TQM, I like your writing style. Sometimes I even like the story....a lot. But you can't publish and attempt to police the response. We are not automatons. Suck it up, bubba, you went public and must take whatever medicine you have coming.

But please complete the telling. In spite of my preferences, I find myself drawn to the story. Oh, but try not to repeat the same justifications too often. It takes three times to make the point, at eight you're starting to drone, at twelve annoy. Just get on with it.

Can't wait to see the next episode. I am not expecting a fatal ending. This story is a common story, very hot, usually a man's story, but as women are more empowered, they do the same thing. The spouse usually does forgive if he/she does find out, and the lover is never as bad as most want them to be. Hot story. Keep it up.Cheated on spouses understand now, more than ever, affairs are not about them doing anything wrong.

Did you ever meet someone who has nothing to say and drones on and on anyway? If you have managed to make it through this drivel, now you have.

Just 7 pages of justification of a wife cheating on her husband. Why not get divorced and move on. She gets half anyways regardless.Probably gets the kids as well. Then she is no longer disrespecting hubby and she can whore herself out as much as she wants.Is the deception even necessary?

Strong negativity over the usual. A number of clear fans too.

Here's a thought, though, for anyone who will read this comment. The instructions at the top of the story - you can see them in a number of different ways:

1) as sincere instructions

2) poking fun (ok, mocking) at some readers and their comments which I know are coming

3) as part of the story.

So in case anyone is actually wondering - they are intended as all 3.

Two other points:

A) not using a condom - I see it as a problem of the story. Really. Wanted it to be condomless (because it was); but you'd think Anne would want otherwise

B)why did Luke want her? Surely the fact she was hot and easy is reason enough?

Last thought: I end with "to be continued"

You can see that too as a) information I'm giving you; or b) part of the story. Think about it.

She obviously never read Robert Burns' "To a Mousie."

This has been a very interesting and rousing read. I sort of hope that things end up ok for Anne. I sort of wish that things end up not as good for Luke. Oh well, we'll find out.....soon, I hope!

The full page disclaimer. The writer is very sensitive to any criticism against the subject matter. Well you got take the good with the bad in this field. Now as for the story, it was a very long dragged out explanation with further disclaimers for a selfish self centered and egotistic woman who obviously does not care about her husband or children. Not erotic at all. If you stop all the disclaimers and shortened up the excuse for the wife's arrogance then it would have been a little easier to read. Doesn't change the opinions of the wife but would make the writer a little better and I would read more from you.

"4.If you require cheating wives to be punished; if you require husbands to find out the bad things their wives are doing and to take action; if you require bad outcomes for those that have cheated and expect a cosmic justice – please – please – please – do not read this story – you'll be most unhappy.

5.Comments from relatively normal humans are welcome."

Being a relatively normal human, I'll offer some comments. First, thanks for the warning. I didn't bother to read most of this crap. Second, I don't believe that a preference for stories in which husbands are not clueless idiots, and in which wives who disrespect their husband receive some measure of justice, makes me the one in the wrong.

a whore for a wife,that can fuck who and where she wants.there conseqences to fucking over people.

I like this sort of preamble........However I am relativly normal too and I like to change cheating wives to better wives stories so .........Is this not normal????????

BTW I do not read your story but this relativly normal thing a little not too fair.........

***4.If you require cheating wives to be punished; if you require husbands to find out the bad things their wives are doing and to take action; if you require bad outcomes for those that have cheated and expect a cosmic justice – please – please – please – do not read this story – you'll be most unhappy.

5.Comments from relatively normal humans are welcome.***

I got here and stopped, then skipped here to the end. Now, what normal man whose wife, or in my case, ex-fiancé cheats on him would not want to get some measure of payback? If you believe that cheating wives are "normal" and should be accepted by everyone, and also believe that the wronged husband deserves a cheating wife when he has done nothing wrong, then you, sir or ma'am, should probably take your own advice and get help.

That said, I won't say anything bad about the lifestyle. It just isn't for my wife or me. As for the tale itself, I haven't read it or rated it, and I have no intention of doing so. Have a good day, and carry on.

Unrated.

You'd have to be a very very fucked up person to consider this normal so maybe you should get some help asshole!

whether it was intentional or not, TQM provided us with a glimpse into the thought process of a wife who begins to contemplate an affair or one night stand. She believes that to cheat is a rational business like decision. Her thought process allows her to be a slut without actually believing she is one. It provides a cloak of logic that masks the fallacies in her reasoning. We are able to see the short circuit in her brain as it happens. Her supposed business like decision making process is flawed and we get to see it.

Take it as a cautionary tale even if he didn't intend to be one. I suspect that inspite of the preamble that we shall see some consequences in the next chapter. It is curious that he did not give the husband a name.

Kind of like an erotic story written by jack webb....

Won't even fucking bother to reason why. Erotic? Not in my world.

I did not read the story, because I know I would absolutely hate it.

TQM,

It's quite a challenge to show how a sexual obsession can change a faithful wife into a cheating slut. You captured some of the thoughts and feelings she had, but the story would have been stronger if you had expressed her desires in her own words "stream of consciousness" style.

The biggest problem with your depiction of her actions is that it is inconsistent with her being a talented, successful business executive. Unprotected sex with two strangers? Bringing your sex partners back to your hotel room with all your personal identification easily accessible? Using your real first name? Posing for nude photos with your face clearly visible? How could a good business decision maker make such poor personal decisions for her first extramarital sex flings!

If she ends up getting blackmailed by Luke, I hope Anne finally makes a good decision and hires a contract killer to erase her many cheating mistakes.

3) Then understand there are men who have been believed to be a "wimp of a husband" who have left other "men" who thought they were "alpha males" crying like little girls and literally soiling themselves and begging for mercy.

Then try writing again.

'nuff said

Possessiveness is part of a committed relationship. Indeed, when you have "committed" yourself to a marriage for life, you make a bargain: sex only with my spouse. If you love someone, and you marry them, you do not want to risk losing them. If you have kids, you do not want to risk hurting them or their other parent - if you love them. If you cheat on your spouse and your kids - you do not love them. It is that simple. You may be nice to them. You may "act" as if you love them - but to trade a few orgasms and thrills for your relationship with your family - proves that you do not really love them in any significant way. If you have ever met the children of parents who have cheated while the kids were small, you can see the effects in the children. The cheating parent slapped them in their faces with their infidelity. They traded / sacrificed their kids for a little pussy / cock. Yes sex is great! Yes we all have desires. No we all do not cheat. Some of us actually have strong feelings of love for our families and know that trading sex for family is a selfish - foolish deal. So, in regards to your preface, I must tell you that it was simply foolish! BTW, I have met a lot of cheaters over the years. They all have one thing in common regardless of intelligence, appearance, status - they are all exceptionally selfish people. None of them was really all that upset about losing their families to divorce. They more or less viewed their families as an inconvenience. The women with kids who cheated, actually got custody in the divorce because the judge thought it was in the "best interests of the children", really? Just because she has a pussy, she is the better parent? The fact that she drove the kids father away so she could indulge her ego did not seem to get taken into consideration. The funny thing is that these women, spent most of their free time pursuing their own happiness, not nurturing and taking care of their kids. The kids were just accessories in their lives, and another source of income for some. So, continue your demented rationalization of selfishness. Pretend that their are no consequences if you like, it is your fantasy. Check the definition of sociopath, you might have a revelation.

I read a short story by a woman a couple weeks ago who said other than the exact quotes --- fictionalized for the advancement of a story, just like these thousands of pages of exact quotes attributed to Jesus and Buddha whom NO BODY quoted when they're still alive and NO BODY could quote anyone from memory 30 to 40 years AFTER their passing --- that HER STORY was over-all true, about her and her husband, a white couple from England, vacationing in the Caribbean islands... deciding to fuck around... well, more specifically, deciding to have HER FUCK around, with multiple brothers with really big shlongs, without protection, and that NOW she's not only pregnant with a baby but that she's ALSO CONTRACTED the HIV...

I said, okay, if you felt compel to write a story and announce it's a "real story," then I will make comments accordingly... That is, I NOTED what a complete set of fools she and her husband were/are... and that I found retarded people like that who put themselves, their kids, other around them in danger... by going to COMPLETE STRANGERS and started SUCKING and INJESTING BODILY FLUIDS... as if their LIVES ACTUALLY DEPENDED on such gross & dangerous activities ... I moralized my rambling by saying such Darwin Award Recipient winners DIDN'T deserve to procreate, much less live long prosperous lives...

Anyway, here, of course, the author tells us it's a simple & completely FICTIONAL cheating story. Okay, that's good to know....

But, as a few others have noted, after having read Literotica for some years now, these days I TEND to read the COMMENTS first, to see if there's any TREND or over-lapping or converging thoughts, "bad" or "good," before I'd read it.

The length, I don't mind. The longer the better, for me, in fact. But if --- as others have noted --- it's gonna take 7 pages to establish the *sluttiness* and stupidity of a woman who prides herself being extremely accomplishing and intelligent... then, well, I am NOT going to read the story UNTIL and UNLESS the continuation brings about some DRASTIC plot or characterization change.

I don't care that much --- it's no big deal to me --- if the woman continues to fuck around, patting herself on the back about her being so smart and about her cuckhold and jealous husband being so dumb... and she'd could have her cake and eat it, too, etc. If it's a CLEVERLY written story, of a cleverly scheming wife (or husband) doing the most VILE THINGS to herself and to her family... then I have no problem with it. It simply TELLS THE READERS how witty/clever the AUTHOR is, to have come up with a story like that....

But, again, it is going to be pages after pages of some moron characters telling --- whether in third or first person --- how smart and accomplished she or he is... by fucking around, with strangers, INJESTING such strangers BODILY FLUIDS, *thinking* : Oh, this is SO FUN and there's NO FUCKIN' way I'd catch any disease and there's no way my evil spouse gonna know about them.... then, well.... I am not going to waste my time reading such a story, such a character.... There's no point for ME to waste my time over it....

NOR is there a point for the AUTHOR to waste his or her time writing such a long and pointless story.... That is, if 2-3 pages are sufficient to tell the story of a moronic married man or woman who fucks around thinking he or she is this or that, when it is easy for a semi-intelligent person to clearly see and clearly understand she or he IS NOT this or that...

Women are solely life support systems for their Cunts with no other redeeming qualities whatsoever

GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey Crack Head, where did you learn to write such fucking trash.

He just pisses off everyone, and no one would miss him if he died. He has nothing else to do but read stories and then bitch about them. Don't talk it5h him just delete him!!!!! Love the story so far and your writing us great!!!! Can't wait to see ho this develops. Again fuck Anony. We all hate the little fag!!!!!

I'm getting emails wishing I and my family would die. I'm getting emails from people that want me to write their stories. I'm getting people who have "favourited" (note the British spelling) the story and people who have bothered to comment just to tell me they haven't read it.

I agree with the comments on the lack of the use of condoms - in fact, I think I made the comment myself first, earlier on in these comments. But the fact is a whole heck of a lot of people still don't use condoms for casual hook ups. Either you assume such people are either stupid, unsuccessful low lifes; or you allow for them in stories sometimes.

I did not read this story and did not vote . My only concern is that my description of a relatively normal human and your's are no where near the same . If what you wrote below is what you think is normal .I really don't what to know what you think is abnormal .

1.If you like reading about wives that have extramarital sex,

2. You should seek help.

3.If you feel the deep-seated need to moralize and comment . Then feel free to do so .

4.If you require cheating wives to be punished; if you require husbands to find out the bad things their wives are doing and to take action; if you require bad outcomes for those that have cheated and expect a cosmic justice . I guess you're shit out of luck because none of that is here . If you disagree with above said comments . Go back to #2...

5.Comments from relatively normal humans are not welcome. Comments from everyone else is always welcome .

I love that you had build up this time, unlike your other stories. And the buildup was great... you made her out to be quite a catch. I love that she resembled so many sexy married businesswomen in this world that other guys want to get on. You set her up nicely.

However, I was disappointed with the direction you went. You had so many naughty avenues to go down with her young co-workers, dirty older men, friends' husbands. But you chose anonymous men that she had no emotional attachment to. That's just not very erotic to me.

I like to see persistent men - some of which never would have had a chance - break a faithful woman down. You touched on something very intriguing - you said she realized men hit on her because of her stature... that she was the powerful businesswoman that would be the ultimate score... and it kind of turned her on to think that. I was hoping you would exploit that... she would find the temptation unbearable to succumb to those men and give them the fantasy they only dreamed of. Because she knows them and has connections to them business-wise or otherwise only makes it that much more naughty.

That she entertained those naughty thoughts, but then dismissed them so that she could go fulfill her urges with some strangers with no strings attached was disappointing to me.

I've been in that position when I was a 22 year old staff member who used to get together with all my work buddies and talk about how great it would be to bend the gorgeous married 30-something VP over her desk and pound her till she screams for more. Or when the warehouse workers would stare at her cute ass as she walked by and talk obscenities under their breath. Or the dirty old business men who wanted to conquer the young star and have her beg for more. Those are the naughtiest fantasies that an author as talented as you should make happen.

It really took me a lot of effort to read this story. I liked the premise and the story line. The build up was fine, you really captured the motivation for the affair but over all it was stark. The foundation was ther, the skeletal frame work was firmly in place but it was missing something.

The detail was missing. The descriptors, the juice, it was meat and potatoes without the gravy, the buns, the vegetables, it could have been so much more. It needed fleshing out, greater dialogue possibly. These two needed to talk more, convey their lust for each other at a base level. Something just seemed to be missing, the passion you were alluding to was never quite delivered.

I lived in Dallas for twenty-five years and my wife and I had our regular bar, but not a meat market as described on page 2 by Anne. The incident recalled was in October during State Fair of Texas time, about now every year, and involved a casual friend of ours, an attractive lady in her thirties I'll just call Miss P. On a Saturday afternoon, my then wife and I sitting at a table sipping beer and chilling when our friend walked in with two very young US Marines in full Dress Blue uniform. Miss P had one marine on each arm as she walked through the door to the pub and proudly called out, "Look what I won at the fair." Everyone applauded.

It was forty years ago but the memory is clear.

1 Any American woman in her thirties is a reasonably experienced cock sucker! She's been doing it for 15 years. That she does not give her husband blow jobs is ridiculous.

2 Any woman with brains would not fuck a pickup in her own hotel room period. And to let the human dildo take pictures, no way.

This is a huge disconnect from the logical, smart woman you introduced us to. It pretty much trashed the story for me.

Cool story, but over repeating of reasoning behind thoughts of cheating and preventive action to avoid detection.

I would have given your story a 5 but it did not mesh toward the end. The wife was a whore and of that there can be no dispute. She let her boy toy take pictures that could come back to bite her and now I hope it does simply because she acted out of character from how you introduced her. You have stretched the realm of believability to the breaking point and beyond.

Who cares about these worthless people, you are a sick little fuck.

Continue it ------ Please

yes continue please. I love it, not to be judgmental, or moralistic but I am hope your annie character sweats now leaving her husband to take care of the house while she travels, works and sluts around. great story please continue the story. 5 stars

But it seems that you've steered away from the original story line of her needing extramarital sexual outlets to become involved in a sticky, complicated character clash that can only end up unhappily. Too bad that you would repeat the same type of plot that too many other Literotica authors like to tangle themselves up in, instead of keeping to simple straight extra-marital sex with strangers for the satisfaction that Anne can't get with her hubby. I don't like where you're headed with this.

Still deciding what I think of it. I do feel I was tricked into starting something that may never be finished. That happened in at least one of this author's other pieces.

Anne seems rather like a hormone driven abacus. She bounces between being immorally logical and immorally horny. Hard to imagine this combination not being noticed by hubby.

One other thing that confused me is that there seemed to be a long gap between when Luke tracks her down and when he contacts her. That comes from the statement that it would be warm even in the evening(Sounds like August or September where daytime avg is 85 and 78) and the email coming in January. Not sure why that would happen.

Also the prose did seem to drag on a bit.

SO I do hope to see more of this but I can't say I LOVED it.

Author - thanks for the warning up front but really go away again and stay there.

I gave you a 5, good story, good character development. So, with this "To be continued"? What is up? Yours, Any Nonymous

5 stars, great story looking forward to see more

Shame there was no follow up to the story. Wanted to see how she continued to cheat (the once a cheater syndrome). She obviously no longer loved her husband so it would have been interesting to see where you took it. My loss for reading it without checking to see if it finished.

Please please please stop.

Enjoyed this story hope you continue. Please don't leave us hanging.

It is good to see you back. Always enjoyed your stories very much. Hope you write the next installment soon and then many more stories!!!!

Between this story and his previous effort. Perhaps he'll stay away until 2020 this time.

Please continue this story, its a great read

Can't wait for the sequel........ hurry up, lol.

Where is the rest of it?

the rest of the story.....

This was a really well written story which I found to be a real emotional roller coaster ride for the wife. Would love to see it continued and see how it plays out. Thanks for writing and sharing your stories.

What's the old saying "stupid is stupid does" or something like that, taking the risk and being caught on camera, not the action of an intelligent woman in business. Well written and agree there should be another chapter.

Saved myself a lot of time and trouble, just skipped to the end to thank you for the warning.

They never think of anyone but themselves.

eat shit dear annony I gave this a 5

5 stars! NO I don't approve of this persons shitty behavior, but it is out there, and reality is they usually get away with it, American Business rewards sociopathy.

OldBearSwitch Well portrayed, I have known lots of these losers over the years.

There is of course a similar version of the male cheater, I hope this writer does a story baring the thought processes of them too,

fag cuck shit.

So, you consider those of us who believe that cheating wives should suffer consequences as not normal?????