All Comments on 'Annia Ch. 02'

I've been waiting for this, I can say i'm not disappointed at all but if you can make it a bit longer, it will be better appreciated (from my point of view tho') minus that, the story is amazing, love the characters, love the build-up, few errors but you will do better. Thanks for sharing. Hope Chap 3 is on the way?

I'd forgotten about this story because it has been so long since Ch. 1. Please write more soon. I liked the build-up, the detailed descriptions of their eyes and Annia's hair, and of course the chemistry. This new direct boss and employee relationship should be great. Looking forward to more!

Loved it... Hopefully the wait won't be too long,,, but as they as the longer the wait the better it is... Thanks for sharing!

I had to go back and reread the first chapter to familiarize myself with this story again. I loved it but yes, it is too short. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Not long enough. Love the build up

I am absolutely captivated by this story! I hope the wait for the next chapter isn't too long! :)

Thank you for continuing this and spoiling us some more!

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Even with some errors (two that particularly stand out are cession in place of session and "because you scare you.") it is still an enthralling installment. You write believable characters that the reader wants to read more about and who interact in ways that are instantly relatable, and that is much harder to learn than good grammar.

I'm very glad you continued the story and hope you can find an editor to polish for you.

Ok, you got me - hook, line, and sinker! Man, I felt like Annia, afraid to look into gorgeous grey eyes, not being able to breath - that lightening bolt striking tree attraction! In any other sport and on Dancing with the Stars, 10 is the highest score and despite the grammatical errors, the level of difficulty and how the words are so well crafted to make you the fly on the wall seeing this unfold is beyond impressive. I rarely give 5 stars. I can count on both hands and have fingers left over, on the amount I've giving this year. Annia is now one of them and I still have a finger left. Excellent work MintMilkTea. Now to go back and read chapter 1. Thanks for the good read

Pleas don't have us wait too loom for the next chapter!

Please don't leave us hanging.

This is way too beautiful and deep.

You got me hooked! More please!

Even some error in your writing, the story's still great. And I already hope that Annia will find happiness. So, please continue!

Great story, even with all the errors. Hope you find an editor.