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by mjar65

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
great story

Sounds like Annie enjoyed it. It would be good if she gets them both in her cunt at the same time. Both shooting their cum into her cunt simultaneously.

swingerjoeswingerjoeover 10 years ago
Hot story

It is a hot story, but I think it would be even hotter with more character development. As a reader, I know nothing about Vince, for example, except what he looks like.

Also, the dialog pulled me away from the story a few times, as I just can't imagine anyone speaking like that in real life. For example: "John is going to cum as well. After you shoot inside me he will fill me up with his cum as well."

Thanks for sharing this story, and please keep writing.

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