All Comments on 'Annie's Story Ch. 01'

Well written, plausible and erotic. Congratulations!

This is an excellent first entry. It kept me going through it, and did not lose my interest at a single point. I'm looking forward to more submissions from you.

Read the whole thing. The buildup was really good. It kept the right amount of interest leading up to the finale! Not too over the top at all. Very believable the way the events unfolded.

Very arousing.

One of the best stories I've read so far. The author has done a wonderful work building up the erotic tension up to the finale.

It may have kept the second commenter going. All I can say is that it kept me coming! Well done indeed. Freddy