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by akford

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CliterateDykeCliterateDykeabout 6 years ago

If you're too lazy to set up a bio & don't have any favorites, you're not worth the investment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
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It’s a great story but it was hard at times to picture what was going on because of the perspective you wrote it in. I couldn’t keep up with who was doing who. If you did it first person from Georgia’s perspective it could’ve been better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Quite hot but...

Confusing. Had to read the ending thrice to understand. Sorry.

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