All Comments on 'Anniversary Gift'

You've managed to paint a picture of words, that are incredibly sensual, highly erotic and completely enthralling. Bravo!

That was insanely good oh my gosh! :) I have to say this is one of my big time fantasies and reading this only makes me want to do it more. Amazing job with how you wrote this-I love it.

This is the most arousing story I have read in a long time, and it's well- written too..

I love when stories move from the 'she did this, he stuck that there' style and focus on what the characters experience and feel. It draws me along. This is a ripping example of it; hot, sexy and very worthy of 5 stars. Nice work!!

Just wanted to say thank you to all those who have read and enjoyed my story! :)

thisstoryis the be story that ive read on this site. You put this story intoart form

Amazing. I can hardly wait to read about the whispered things from Mandy to Elise and Erik getting involved too. Damn I'm getting wet again just thinking about it. Please, please write more!!!

Outstanding, me some great ideas to spice thing up