All Comments on 'Anniversary Proposal Ch. 04: The Finale!'

Great content, great detail in emotions, and action. You should of carried that to the end between the husand and wife. Instead you decided to make a quick wrap-up ending. That ruined the story. You should of expanded the D/s dynamic that now the wife has to face and then end it like you did the other action scenes.

great story

I will take the rewrite under advisement.