by ubertroll
Graphic details that draw a picture in the mind that arouses, while making one feel intimately involved with the scenario, rather than feeling like an outsider with one's nose pressed upon the glass.
awesome story! it left me tingling! i'd love to read more of your work. ;)
about these characters, who they were, how they met, what happened to them. Your tale was a perfect glimpse into a tiny bit of their lives. I could imagine myself and what I'd do in that situation. (And now I'm smiling and anticipating the next few minutes!)
Holy crap.
Well crafted, well played, and intensity to make your blood boil. I like another commenter am smiling knowing what comes next.
This is a marvelous little romance, but it lacks a good introduction to the characters, and its use of the present tense is a drawback. However, the descriptive qualities of the story and the wonderful relationship of the couple overcomes all of that. This is a warm, sweet, tender love story, a joy to read.