All Comments on 'Anonymous Lover Ch. 01'

Well written, erotic - can't wait for more.

Great job! Cant wait for the next chapter!

Keep it up! you're a natural.

Just with previous controversy over legal age in different countries removed.

good read, keep it up.

I enjoyed the story and would like to read more of him and his sister. Thanks

Very well written, look forward to checking out pt 2!

A WELL WRITTEN STORY, using the readers imagination to help tell the story. Worth 5s.

This is really interesting. I love how you developed the story so far. I will save the rest of my comments until the end. I'm so into it that I don't want to keep stopping to comment... ;-P

Great story! Waiting on chapter 2 and more... well written though he must have been really out of it if he didn't know he had just had a virgin when he hit resistance and the following reaction with his 'partner' after the following deflowering.. He didn't recognize the similarities with his sister or voice... All in all a good story though.. keep it going please!

I had a feeling it was his sister, great tiny clues in the story. Kept me reading, then finding the mask.............. I am sure his mind was blown.

Thanks.

Can't wait to read the follow up..

Deep passionate kisses, oral sex.

Try it with a mask on sometime - ain't gonna happen.

Otherwise quite good although he must be pig ignorant not to realise she was a virgin.

How exciting for sister to seduce her brother this way. Excellent story.

Great flow and technique, hot sex, great descriptives, all around a great story!

Yes we knew what the reveal would be at the end because of the way the story flowed and the category that it was in, but damn you did good. Yes I will read the rest of this story and the others you have.

Unf, and oh boy... Getting ready for a wild ride with this one ;)

I loved the story. The bit about the mask reminded me of the story line from the book " The story of O."

Wonderful surprise at the end of the story.

Must read the sequels.

My heartiest congratulations in that this is the only story I have caught up with where at least one of the protagonists actually removed shoes.

I liked the air of mystery, but suspected who proved to be the mystery chick. Still, well done and I will continue.

I'd like to see this relationship pan out

Nice story. Great set up. Thank you, it was great. Oldsilver

Nice start enough build up to keep it interesting.

I love that there was more to the encounter than just dirty sex. It was nice, for me at least, to see the bloke felt something more. And that is a brilliant ending to this chapter. Thanks!

Beautiful story

This is a good start, but it's too bad that the site's insistence on classifying stories gave away the end. Hope you can maintain the quality.

I knew it from the beginning! Freaking awesome! 5/5

Love it, second time read.

Great set-up and character introductions...

Knowing where it was going from when they first met, and it was STILL white hot! WOW!

Five Stars

Definitely worth a part 2 (at least)