All Comments on 'Another 'Alba' Story: The Shoot'

I loved the story and I agree to no end with the moral of the story "always have cold showers when thoughts of Jessica Alba crop up." You have a way of telling the story so that it almost seem real. For me a person who believes Jessica Alba is the hottest woman to walk the Earth, I can't get enough of stories like this. I hope you continue to write Stories about her and her alter ego "Max".

Once again, fantastic work. Your characters including Jessica Alba has a real quality to them eg- nervousness and unease, instead of being like porn stars with no imperfections. That for me really sells it and makes the fiction almost believable. Thanks a lot and hope its not the last.

Another awsome post. Love your Alba storys, very hot. Please keep them coming.

Super hot story. Very well written my friend.