All Comments on 'Another Beautiful Night in Heaven'

by Toor26

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DanielOrmeDanielOrmeover 9 years ago
Excellent debut

Very good first story. Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice story

You should definitely write a sequel to this. Continue the story of her life as a lesbian sex slave in hell. Now that she is in hell you can have her mistress show her off to the the other lesbian demons and they can give her a good gang bang.

Sam_WolfSam_Wolfover 7 years ago
I applaud you

Please do write more. You have a great writing style.

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