All Comments on 'Another Changed Life Ch. 03'

Love it! Love it! Love it!

Ditto! Ditto! Ditto!

awesomeness!!

but why do i get the feeling there is more to this story to come and not all of it happy ...

I love your writing so much it's silly.

The only thing that bugs me, is when I can't get to your stories soon enough to read them. Excellent work as always. Cant wait for the next update... Cat

The romance shifts to her point of view. Who knew she'd long loved this arrogant misogynistic bastard? I love the device of proof of love by sleeping (as in catching a few zees) cuddled up and with kisses but NO sex. Any good man loves that idea (which I did not get to do with the final great love of my life), and our semipro one-night specialist learns a lot from it. The shifts in his emotions are well described. And on to the next chapter -- the boy, as the genie says of Aladdin, "CAN be taught."

As much as im enjoying myself reading this story, can't help but wonder where is the suspence? you know...the excitment of the unknown? It feels like this is the second half of the story where the flirtation dance and unspoken mutual attraction is already passed. Its a wondefull story but lacks sparks