All Comments on 'Another Day'

I'll admit i like your other work better but this isn't bad. I think you should keep the spy stories more action oriented. Although this had some pretty humorous parts, i want to read about Al doing his spy work. Perhaps this is just some back story on Al's part. Your a gifted writer. Where is Noise part 2?

Security at an american airport cannot ask you for a passport in a baggage claim area. You do not have to present any I.D. to any one in this country except to a cop at a traffic stop or to security prior to entering a secure area at an airport for the purposes of boarding a flight.

where is the rest of the story?