All Comments on 'Another Forgotten Valentine's Day'

Lovely read despite some typos. A stronger contender for best Valentines Day story.

Forget the typo's, it was a wonderful story.

Brilliant idea, and I loved the reconciliation with Lucy. The shift back and forth to first person and getting some of the names mixed up early on hurt the story, though. I also would have loved to learn more about Helen's relationship with both of them. That said, nicely done!

Don't forget we are here to read good stories with exciting, great sex.

Not every story needs to have hot sex, especially romance contest entries. But they do need a pausible plot, filled in with detail throughout. You have accomplished this.

The downside to your story was the jarring shift in narrative from third person to first and back.

One other thing, Ricky and Lucy? Really? You have some " 'splaining to do".

I think that this is the best non-erotic story I've read on the site! Keep writing!!

This story reminded me to stop and look at the little things. Because things happen that we can't control and cause us regrets. Sometimes we are lucky enough to have a second chance.

Awesome, beautiful sweet tradition and poignant story!

Very nice. Kind of schmaltzy, but good.

Thanks for the effort.

A typical "modern" women. Me, me, me. And what have you done for ME lately.....

Great story.

The bitch still didn't get Ricky anything!

AMAZING story!!!!!!! Perfect!

Lovely.