All Comments on 'Another Kind of Romance'

That was great and satisfying. Want more. What will he make her do next?

Just stumbled across this site after reading some "published" erotica that left me bored and wanting better. You're better than people who are making money from their stories. Well done.

Thank you both, for the encouraging words. I have another scene or two for this story and am working on another longer multiple chapter submission. I look forward to more feedback so that I can get better.

Very good in fact.

Please write more.

You would never guess this was your first submission. VERY well written. You can tell you took the time to edit properly and thought out the story line before writing. I so hope we read more of your writings soon!!! I`d love to know if this is a chapter of a longer story and if so, what do the other chapters contain.

Thank you so much for submitting this to be read!

Thank You Anon for the high praise. This will be a three part series with a Deux and Trois to follow. I am almost done with part two. It will cover some more anal training and double penetration. Trois will be about a threesome with a bit of a twist that I hope people will enjoy. I am a horrible perfectionist so editing takes me a long time. I am also plotting out a 10-14 chapter story, that will cover a reluctant group situation.

I really enjoyed your story. You are a great story teller. I would love to know more about the characters and how they originally got together. It's important to me to have more information regarding whether they are in a public or private venue. That's just me though. Looking forward to the next part.

good one quite hot actually and short one too

took me rather longer to give it a read but was worth it

he slapped my buttocks a few more times. He continued his attack pressing through the tight ring

some men use hard spanking to divert girls attention from anal strecthing pain or diverting her mind from the current pain to other pain

some use clittoral simulation ,vaginal finguring , fondling tits or licking kissing biting neck whispering and moaning in ear or diverting her mind away from the anal pain to some pleasurable romantic things he usually do to her

your guy gives you another pain to stop thinking about this pain fron taking your anal cherry

i am very thankful of you for making your guy use some lubericant and fingering dilation while popping her anal cherry

most of literotica writers hate mention of any lube in their stories while doing anal which makes me question about their anal experience and practices both while receiving and giving

they usually ruin anal sex converting it into totally painful bloody rectum tearing probing gore sex which disappoints me a lot

"He rolled over, first shoving me away, while he took a long drink of water, then grabbing me by the back of the neck he pulled me into his side he let out a sigh"

whats with his mood change hot and cold throwing her away then snatching her back

is he bipolar or something

he should worship her that she gave him her anal cherry mostly sacrificing her pleasure and receiving so much pain but instead he shoved her away with no concerns

your story rocks but the guy is really mean

most guys shower their girls with kisses and praises if they are tge first one to break into her tight asshole