Another Love Pt. 03-04

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RichardGerald
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"But the government had no luck with that engine," Sporan stated in his deep flat voice without mentioning the three men and one woman who had died before the bureaucrats in the Pentagon felt the cost was too high to continue.

Persephone's supporter had taken her blueprints and a new set of specifications to an abandoned warehouse in Buffalo, New York and two years later Persephone V had emerged. They flew her to the high Nevada Plains and began to test her.

Phil Hart was at the end of his career and hoping to go out with a record that would stand up. Persephone promised to send him out with a bang one way or the other.

"It's just that noise on the first run that is bothering me," Hart said.

"Noise?"

"A kind of whispering sound as if she was talking,"

Sporan only shook his head. They never used "IT" with this monster. Persephone was definitely a "SHE", and when she came to life, she was fast and smooth and powerful as the fires of hell. Very likely to take you there too.

Persephone was ready. Hart walked to his vehicle and strapped himself in, then man and machine were towed out to where the run back across the salt was to begin. The second required run for the record. The sun was well up as Hart ran the last checks and counted down to his start.

Persephone surged to life. Brushed past the sound barrier and was easing past the 1000 mile an hour record when Hart heard her.

"Faster, Faster, Go Faster," she said, a passionate lover giving herself to the man inside her.

*****

I hope you enjoyed reading this as much as I did the writing. I know that there are some of you who want infidelity punished. Sorry but there was a better story here. As to those who find the relationship between the sons and the father strange, I can only say you must not have grown sons. It is a very difficult relationship especially for a man like the one I describe here: shy, introverted, and obsessed with his work.

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AnonymousAnonymous18 days ago

The MC is weak, just because he fights for his country and develops jet engines doesnt mean he can't be weak in his relationship with his wife. He is exceptionally weak in this aspect. How does he stay in the house when all the other relatives turn up. Come on! That is soooo unbelivable. Hasn't he heard about motels. I would rather sleep in the office or my car than stay there. And that is why he is weak. I am not into BTB but I personally could not stand that level of disrespect and lies. I could not stay in a house full of his relatives. Why does he allow it. This is another example of him being weak and cowtowing to his wife and what she wants. On the other hand you can flip it and make a case for him being strong and loving his wife so much he puts up with everything. I do feel that author seems to confuse loving someone with forgiveness. You can love someone but because they hurst you badly you cannot forgive or stay with them. Very mixed feelings with this story. I cannot score it high and I see that the general consesnus of votes agee. Part one scores well then the following parts where the author expands on the level of cheating by the wife and then recoreconciliation by having a threesome do not do so well. I wish I had known that when I divorced my partner for cheating everything would be better by a FFM threesome. Knowing my luck it would have been MMF.

AnonymousAnonymous23 days ago

The author had a vision for the story and wrote it accordingly. It was well written and I'm sure annoyed some whilst delighting others. I have my opinion on this version of the story which is just that, a personal opinion. For the writing quality this is very good. I didn't like the ending myself as I have always felt that this is a story about lies, deception, manipulation as well as love. I just don't see the two woman loving the MC whilst they did love Phillipe. Which is why this version doesn't work for me personally. BardnotBard

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I come back to this story every so often to read the comments. I can always use a good laugh!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

First of all I find it hilarious that all these LDM are calling the protagonist a weak cuckold wimp. This character who fought for his country, developed better jet engines, and led men into combat is the wimp while these anonymous brain dead trolls who still live in their mothers’ basements or are the king of their single wide call him named.

It’s a f**cling story! Get some therapy before it’s too late!

JoeBetterBNiceJoeBetterBNiceabout 1 month ago

I read this as it was compared to Feb Sucks and I can see similarity. Both start well, with an unpleasant infidelity situation, and both end up w/ a happy cuckold sucking it up and believing the crap the cheater is selling. I liked the first two parts, 3rd part was clearly meant as a sales pitch of some sort designed to make infidelity okay. Didn't work for me. Wife had zero remorse and was looking out for herself first and foremost. THAT is not love.

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