by mralx99
I liked the set up, the emotions, and the normalcy to the setting. It's fun to read about a calm Dom that is controlling others with his (or her) voice. No props or physical control necessary. Everyone knows their place. Please write more.
There's some confusion about Chapters 01 and 02, but we enjoyed the story (stories?) and hope to see more about the evolving relationships in it (them?)
Definitely 5 stars.