All Comments on 'Another Mistake'

the wives, sisters, and daughters of the two fuck ups

Did not like the story. I know myself and what I'm capable of. Johnny would of been dead along with some of his cronies. I might even include myself and Carolyn. I realize it is just a story but if I had an idea of where it went my eyes would not have scanned the pages. Although it was told well with minor blips.