All Comments on 'Another Place'

more more,,,and soon..

I liked your 2 stories immensly, I am bi/not gay, but those 2 stories both got top rating. The way, you described the action, between them was excellent, but it needs lubrication.

I know that a man's ass can become lubricated w/what I think is male prostrate fluid. Sometimes my ass is slick while jackin'off. So a little more physical detail I find desireable. Just a critique.

Rudy

. . . and I'm hoping the next installment is better

This story reminds me of the fun times I used to have with a friend from grade school! Thanks!