All Comments on 'Another Reunion with an Ex Ch. 04'

There Are sayings about having sex with Friends. You are both so comfortable with one another that the Physical side comes so naturally, it sneaks up on you and suddenly Explodes Violently into Bliss! This was the only part you left out of your story. Bob Giardino

But I think your right. Your using it as a transition to Ch. 5. A few things needed to be said in your story and Ch. 4 was your device to say it.

Why do you feel you need to apologize? Eroticism is an exercise in stimulating the reader's mind and too many stories are ruined by excess. Two paragraphs describing how the couple looks followed by three pages of "Oh fuck! Oh yes, eat pussy! Stick it in my ass! Oh Yes, Oh, I'm cumming, I cumming. Oh shit! I'm CUMMING!!!" doesn't really do it for me.

Of course that's just MY opinion. I might be wrong.