by Sailor1
Enjoyed reading this latest installment. It has great build up and progression. I also like the use of the conflicting matters of being both protector/lover. Looking forward to reading more.
The flow of the story would be enhanced if you would provide translations,in parentheses perhaps, following the German passages. Great story so far. Thank you.
Thank you for your efforts. I can see his problems concerning the young lady.
Continue.
J.