by Sailor1
Do sail on, with luck on the seas of literature.
I like this story, and would like to know the end...
John
I have enjoyed this from Chapter 1, the story satisfies on many levels, at least for me; a well written adventure story and a nicely crafted romance.
Pray Continue.
J.
The story was not long enough, to be really hot, I feel you should have gone on to first time, maybe after a short drive home.
This is the way a love story is written, doesn't need sex . Needs one more chapter to bring it all together. I love the story.
I'm surprised there aren't more comments since 2004. There was a flurry of comments early on, but none since. Compared with most other writers on this site, your stories are head and shoulders above them all.
Perhaps your chapters became buried among the hundreds (probably thousands) of others. A follow-on chapter might bring on renewed interest?
Thanks for sharing your work, and I'm looking forward to reading until the last chapter.
I read this story about 10 years ago I think and I'm coming back now for a second time. Still a great read!