All Comments on 'Another Taste of Perfection Ch. 01'

Ok, that's the best short story published here all week! Fandamtastic!

Can't wait for chapters 2 thru 25. Although I can imaging the sex will be hot, I already see a romantic connection there.

Great job! Thanks so much for your hard work!

Doc

That was a very well written, well thought out piece of erotica. With any luck you will tease us some more.

The positive feedback is awesome. Thanks so much. I've got second and third chapters on the way.

Giggling.............. This chapter had me holding my breath, all wired up and drooling in anticipation and then......... **Whooosh!** it had me slowly exhaling it out again in frustration. Yip, definitely a tease.... LoL

Lana is soooo lascivious and flirtatious, poor Elle didn't stand a chance... grin

Great story, I LOVE IT!

** Eagerly awaiting Chapter 02

What a tease. I loved the story and look forward to another soon. You have great potential. Keep up the good work. ChristieP

That was hot eh! Muddos

It's brief yet so intense! Keeps me craving for more!

Intriguing ...... Patience is a virtue