by JustLikeEwe
I hope you keep this story going, as you seem to have built the foundation for a series, or at least a follow-up to this. Fun and hot reading.
The sequel is a great improvement over the original, but still not wonderful. I hope you keep trying and improving, another dozen stories and you might be first rate.
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<I>-- srgeek --</I>
Your Walk in the Woods series was well written, with excellent character development despite straining credulity. But never mind that, the stories were just plain fun! Kal