by Bazzza
This is such an erotic, so well written, realistic sounding story, and its one of the two or three best stories I have read here, as opposed to the crap and shit I read here. SO nice that for a change I did not have to stop reading a story, because suddenly, as in other seeming straight-sex stories, this did not have a man trying to grope another man or have sex with him. SO well done. 10+
"Vanessa playfully pulled a face, "Sure, so long as he gives it a good wash. I'm not sucking on that after where it's just been.""
Vanessa has had his cock in her mouth; she had just had her mouth all over Addie's pussy. But she won't take his pussy soaked cock in her mouth, even tho there was none of his cum in evidence. A little too squeamish, I think. And hypocritical.
Otherwise, excellent story. A Five.