All Comments on 'Another World'

It was a wonderful story. :)

Oh, it was so magical... but where was alice? River needs to go on a quest to find the other half of her heart.

Oh oh oh... or there needs to be another half of this magical world, a place of industry and corrupting smog... and river learns that alice has been taken there! The stag tells hershe can't go but she knows she has to...

This is such a magic story. You captured how it felt to fall in love with another girl as a child. And I loved the feeling of the magic of nature permeating her senses. And the stag... he was very special, but I almost wanted him to stay a chaste guide, helping her reconnect with her beloved alice.