by bobsgirl
Bobsgirl, you have a talent for evoking mental tension in your work and that's a powerful force in a story such as this. If I could just offer one small bit of criticism about this story, it would be that it appeared far too long after your first submission.
Oh, speaking of submission - when are we going to see your heroine give in a little more to her submissive needs? They're quite clear here. Bravo, bravissimo!
very hot! the submissiveness was very appealing and i enjoyed the narrator's way of enjoying her wantonness, luxuriating in it. :>
ed
It's just as good the 5th or so time around! Lots of heat, fantasy material, well-written, and I like the title. Keep up the great work, Bobsgirl...we need more like this one on Lit!
If Alexander Graham Bell only knew... ;)
I loved this BG, well done, very well done. I wonder what's next? While Al Gore's invention is great it pales in comparison for some things.
So, now what? More please.
Oh wow BG....
I should have made the time to read this back when it was first accepted. To think I missed out on this until now....well, it's my loss.
I like the way you describe the feelings involved.
Nice piece of writing BG.
Dirty talk is what makes the whole experience so amazing and erotic. I need to answer my phone more often
When we talk dirty it can sure make a good mind fuck. This was very nice to read.