All Comments on 'Anthony'

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DawnzoDawnzoover 12 years ago
Not much of a build up

Gave it a 5 none the less

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
After spellcheck proof your writing.

Lots of disruptive errors.

Hot nonetheless. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good story...

Just fix the grammatical errors, and this is easily 5 star story.

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