All Comments on 'Anthony's Detention'

I hope to God this story doesn't stop here.

I have some ideas for continuing it but need to finish my longer story, "On the Beach" first.

Loved it

Well constructed...

Amazing ! Another 5 ! That’s 3- in a row. I’m beginning to see a pattern here. And to think I almost skipped your stories. What a mistake that would have been. Your build up and description of the emotions going through each character’s head was so real I felt like it was me watching her grade papers. Your writing skill is very very good. Great ending too. 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s