All Comments on 'Anticipation Ch. 04'

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Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

When will we see MORE?

I did enjoy the build up. A gradually progressing relationship with a sound basis for friendship before sex. I like that ... a lot. I am hoping that I don't have to wait a YEAR with numerous more chapters, before you describe, in your inimitable writing style, the first time you become even more intimate with her. Looking forward to next chapter ...

5thRing almost 7 years agoAuthor

Well, thank you. :)

As of this reply, I have chapters 5 - 10 pending, so it's largely a matter of being next in line. Chapter 7+ might be quite a while longer because they keep sending chapter 7 back for spelling error correction.

I noticed an error or two in this one, but I guess it's a bit late now.

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