All Comments on 'Antique Store Maid'
by StoryTeller07
- 20 Comments
Anonymousabout 6 years agoThis was good reading. It has the makings of an excellent story
Anonymousabout 6 years agoStarted reading what I thought was going to be another stroke story. Then the unexpected happened, and the story turned into a really good read! Hope we don't have to wait to long for another chapter. Excellent job. Five stars!
Anonymousabout 6 years agoLoved the negotiation sequence. Very creative, thoughtful innuendoes.
pkmaabout 6 years agoBased on the line that he could be either a "murderer, an Australian or anything" you get 5 stars.
Now work for it in the rest of the story.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoAbsolutely one of the best.
Looking forward to reading the sequel and hearing about their adventures.
satinlvr_mwfabout 6 years agoThis story is so out of bounds that it feels realistic. The incredibly wealthy versus the not quite so. A joke gone too far, but had to be played out. I love the premise and the originality. This has 50 Shades written all over it, and I'm hot to read more. Please hurry!
Anonymousabout 6 years agoIt makes a change to find a new storyline . Looking forward to further chapters .
spankfunforabout 6 years agoThis Story Should Go Forward Full-Speed! Really Enjoyed It! Only I Recall Like This Is George Harrison's Wife Going With Eric Clapton! No Fuss! Up Front!
Anonymousabout 6 years agoI have read everything that the story teller has wrote up to this story and plan on continuing to read the rest of the stories anyone can write one good story this individual has remained consistent in the quality of the stories each one the characters are well developed the stories move along at a good pace this story teller has what it takes to be a real author
Wuffleover 4 years agoI think this may be the first "Chapter 1" that has ever made me want to read Chapter 2 - usually I find mutli-chapter stories either too long-winded, or too contrived, or both.
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