All Comments on 'Anya and the Fighter Pt. 01'

A fairly enjoyable story with some conscious development of writer's craft, though a little fast-paced, and with a slightly unrealistic narrative voice in places. A commendable first effort, however.

I would suggest, however, that this has a place within the BDSM category instead, as whilst your protagonist appears to experience some trepidation, she does not appear reluctant, and rather explicitly gives her consent. Just a thought.