All Comments on 'Anya's Unusual Dream Ch. 03'

Please continue) You are my favorite author!

I eagerly look forward to each new chapter. I'm sure Grandma will be able to resist. LOL we know she won't.

Can't wait to read more. This is so hot

You are an amazing writer. I love your work it is so hot and it is my first time reading erotica. The dirty talk of the mother to the daughters was so eroctic. It was ashame it end so soon and didn't continue.

These are great stories. However, I recommend to if down the exclamations in general, the ones in all caps in particular, and especially the “gawd.” We get it, and they’re distracting after only a short bit. It’s a good rule of thumb that you use caps and exclamation marks very sparingly and let your descriptions actually carry their weight instead. Still, great stuff