by LovingSir
I look forward to reading it! Very well done, LovingSir, this was a quite outstanding story. Five stars and a huge 'Thank you'.
Please keep going with this story don't leave us haning please what happens to jane when they get back
This Jane bimbo is a college grad? Please consider adding just a bit of realism to your tale of a professional woman.
I do look forward to seeing how the power dynamic between the 2 women develops. To see Laura develops her lust for power over Jane and how Jane comes to appreciate and need her submission more and more.
Yes !!
Nicely done.
I sure hope they make her move in but keep working maybe only part time, in case they get tired of her she will have some savings to fall back on. The extra time can be used by master and mistress in many ways. I would like to see a collar put on her, perhaps one of the ones with a magnetic lock that can only be removed with the proper frequency key. If she does not move in with them she should be made to wear a chastity belt and only allowed to cum when the couple use her together, however infrequently.
i really enjoyed your writing style. nothing was rushed and each act described in delicious detail. hoping the followup is close at hand.
The two separate stories were great and yes, I encourage you to add subsequent chapters. A fun read with plenty of foreshadowing of what the future might bring.
This story is one of THE best on this site. The erotic content had me hard and more.