All Comments on 'Anything for Zoey'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
this is moving pretty fast...

I also don't think rape is going to let any woman feel sexy at all. Or a normal relationship where the partners are consensually involved in a serious rape role play.. Unless this becomes a BDSM story. I'm not sure how to save this story as being sexually satisfying for either woman. What do I know, you are the author.

I know you said that this is your first time in this catagory. I'll read the next chapter to see where you go with it,

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Stupid as hell

What happened to all the good authors in this category?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
great story lots of potential

great story , comtinue and develop it fully out. does he break them down into a matched set of sister sex slaves? then keep or sell them?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Can't wait for more

I'm eagerly anticipating part 2! This is so good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Very well done can't wait for further chapters

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