All Comments on 'Apartment 718: Nothing But Butt'

I enjoyed the majority of this series. You have the entire series listed twice in the story section of your bio. It was a little confusing. It would help if in your bio you listed the actual order of the chapters since Lit automatically orders the titles alphabetically. Personally I like they way you use the He and i, and how your Dom refer to her parts as his. It's not her cunt, it's his cunt, not her ass, his ass. It's a turn on to read it that way. Once in a while you write 'her ass' instead of 'his ass' and it breaks the rhythm. If you could make those types of assertions more consistent, your story will have better flow. Hope you write more :)