All Comments on 'Aphrodite's Gift Ch. 01'

What a great concept for a story arc. You've created a motivator (within the logic of the fantasy) that will you to write unique stories in every category. Well done.

Love the goddess fantasy idea (I put gods & goddesses in my stories), & Aphrodite was pretty insatiable too.

Couple of things: check your tense. Stay in past or present, be very careful about switching. As a rule, don't.

I feel you rushed into the sex. Enjoy the set up, enjoy the chase. We'll keep reading!

You were in the Ladies, then suddenly in a limo. Rushed maybe?

A good start - write some more!

I appreciate the comments and tips. It's my first time to write since a long time and your comments are really encouraging. Thanks again!

Aphrodite is supposed to be the goddess of love, not just sex.

love will not blossom from simply screwing around (pun intended)

there can be much more potential in a story that has a bargain with the goddess of love, than to get laid with different people in exchange for beauty

CUNT!!! APHRODI-TTTEEEEEEEE!!!