All Comments on 'Aphrodite's Shell Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Loved It

The enlargement of the cruise ship's world and its characters was nice, though the less-intense focus on the family means the story loses some of its intimacy and taboo with the main characters.

I liked the end scene especially.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
just another cockold

manhaters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
awesome story

please please a chapter 5!!!

CreeperclawCreeperclawover 11 years ago
redemption

plz, if ur writing a new chapter let him catch a break. seems too nice of a guy to get all this crap thrown his way

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Hentai

They should make a hentai anime from this script. It would sell like a fucking boss.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
we want chapter 5!

title says it all

devilspy2001devilspy2001over 10 years ago
I want the cuckold bf.....

I want to read where the cuckold boyfriend gets a good pussy fucking and breeding as his girl friend watches. As he sucks on another cock and swallows that load. As he shoots his own load out of his chastity cock. The cuckold needs to be used like the slut bitch his girl friend is.

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