All Comments on 'Apocalypse Slaves Pt. 08'

Mr Studd, wow, that's a neon and chrome flashback reference. Like it

Thanks! I was hoping someone would get the reference. :)

This is probably my favourite of all of your Apocalypse Slaves stories because it felt by far the most complete story wise. Some of the parts are more vignettes with no real connection and some of the earlier segments were just a loose veneer of sci-fi to justify a fetish story or general world building. I hope to see more like this in the future

I like the continuation of this story. I was afraid that it was completely over and this was the last installment in another abandoned saga, but then I double checked the release dates.

I hope I can remember to check back up on this again.

I hope that the "interesting combination" might be something along the lines of using body control implants to turn someone into a super assassin sleeper agent or something. Now I'm starting to think about all the sifi stuff that can be done with such advanced implants. I know that's not the focus of the story.

@ Inevitable: you are correct in that regard. initially it had started out that way but then the more I got into this little world, the more it started coming together once I introduced Caine into the mix.

I absolutely love this series so far. I can't wait to read the rest.

Amazing story, it just gets better with each entry. Pearl did give me a few frights as I read but I can understand her desire to face retribution for everything she thinks she did wrong

Loving the story line. Another great chapter. But:

(1) it's 9mm, not .9mm the decimal is only used with .38, .357, .45, .22, or .223

(2) human breast milk is sweet, not oily, waxy or bitter. My wife breast fed two babies * still liked having her breast & nipples played with during 'our time'. Small leakages occurred. So yeah, first hand knowledge, it's sweet. Don't know where you got your misinformation from.

Dude, these are really effing amazing. Throughly impressed

Having read all of your stories so far, I like the way that they are evolving into a humanity that is caring and not just kcufing women all of the time.

But I do have one question for you.

In every story I have read all of the men seem to be sporting huge cocks ?

When in reality and the law of averages there has to be many men who have smaller penis's ?

I'm still enjoying your stories and I will read them all through till the end.

@Anon Measuring Tape

Eh, its just how the stories came out. I don't do a lot of editing, vetting, or continuity checks on them when I write them since these are throwaway stories that I have no intention in publishing professionally,

This one was a bit of a wild ride with Cain being an errand boy to Des Moines, having his semi-girl friend be seen assisting him, and him saying he was a lover not a fighter. Then he annihilates an entire executive team, terrorizes the building of people, and takes the wife of the executive as vengeance. Overall, the story got back on track with the ending being more consistent with the character portrayed. 4.5 Stars