All Comments on 'Apologize'

In Chapter 2, I hope Jason fucks his sister's sweet smelly asshole while mom watches!

Thanks for your submission. While it wasn't my sister, the story reminded me of how my cousin and I played a similar apology game for over a year. Perhaps Jason needs to explore his sister further. He could apologize for admiring her luscious ass by driving his tongue, fingers and finally his cock deep into that taboo opening. And since dad is gone so much, perhaps he and his sister need to apologize to mom when the opportunity presents itself. So many possibilities. Again, a great story Sue. Doc

Grammar. Just ok.

Style. Needs work. Seriously.

Build up. Unreal.

Romantic tension. Unreal x2.

VERDICT. Average offering that Literotica puts out these days.

Fix. 2 stars.

Another sweet love story from Sue. Thanks. Enjoyed reading it.

another great story from you it is refreshing to read a nice story with strong emotions rather than some quickie story

This one was totally better than the "Why is she my sister?" story that you wrote. It's better all around in every aspect. 5/5 for this one.