All Comments on 'Appalachia Ch. 01'

What an enjoyably nasty little tidbit to find first thing this morning!

Yum. Very yum.

I liked both the naughty scenery of that inner family intimacy and your rich and sappy language that let me get over the rather short part. Go on with that!

You are one hell of a writer.

Smoking hot, and your descriptions left me with an image of a cock I shall never have the pleasure of ever finding lol

Great story, bring on the rest.

DM

It turned me on, but it's not incest. Even if your mother is getting off on watching you watching her getting fucked still does not make it incest. If follow-up chapters lead to her and him fucking, then those are incest but right now this is nothing more than exihibition with a son and his mother/father.

Just delish. Can't wait to read more. Hope they've got some daughters!

Since it is titled Chapter 1, I believe there will be additional chapters. I found this writing exceptional and look forward to more. Thanks.

Really erotic and fast paced. The only thing I think is needed is more story. I hope it doesn't take too long to see the next chapter, because I would love to read that mom and dad are wanting him to fuck her. Some good sweet hot motherfucking sex, with cum running from all of mom's holes. Thanks for the good chapter........Rich

So Mr. Dark. "An Ivory Tower," must be a big one, eh? Good symbolism against a backdrop of poverty.

Then "good thing the walls are white." Not that I know that much about the whole color of a guy's sperm, but thought it was a sexy idea.

The other things I liked are the lack of a door, and the father choosing the present over buying a door, and of course the bf while her little baby watched. I mean BIG baby. Incest is hinted, is it done? What's is next from you--you seducer of innocent girls? You damn perv, my kinda perv.

missed the word "every" in the first paragraph, that should have been "ever" - "first girl EVER..."