by BustyBlonde1
You need to make your chapters longer the longer the chapter the more interesting it is....the more people will read....if you have to wait forever to get a new chapter an its only one page it gets kinda boring.
he should have had this talk with her before he bit her to give her a choice otherwise he is just like the attempted rapist
KEEP GOING. MUCH BETTER. ENJOYED IT. MORE PLEASE ALSO LONGER PLEASE
if he's as old as his story would indicate he is....why the heck was he in high school with her two years ago??? The story he's telling makes it sound like he's been alpha of that pack for quite some time. While it stands to reason that they age slower than humans that doesn't explain why he'd be attending a small town southern high school. It just doesn't make any sense to me.
LMAO.. "Well... Shit!!" perfect comment to what she just witnessed.. :)
She is confused between the mating pull and not wanting to have anything to do with Matt. Its understandable but she need to talk with someone else in Matt's pack before she make a decision to stay there or not.
well..shit! perfect ending to this chapter! cant wait to read more!
Is hiarious for an ending to the chapter... I can't wait for more, keep up the good work...
Is this the end of the story? I would like to read more. I really liked it. Greetings.
Another story I came to love but won't be complete!! I hate when that happens.
It has been one year since you wrote this chapter, please continue!
I would love to see how Matt and Haleigh's relationship grows and I would also like to meet the rest of the pack and see some of them get mates too!
Pleeeeese continue the story!
How does Matt explain having gone to high school with Haleigh? Are they fully mated or will he need to bite her two more times? Will she need to bite him? How soon will they have pups?
I've really enjoyed this story, please say that your going to finish it.