All Comments on 'Appetite of Desire'

Thanks for your literate and entertaining exposition of a D/s relationship very similar to the one in which I participate. As a gourmet cook, I particularly enjoyed the description of the meal and table setting. Please ignore the ignorant, poorly written and completely erroneous criticism, and continue writing these great stories.

I liked it. I thought it showed that he loved her and yet still maintained the parameters of the D's relationship they were in. NICELY WRITTEN.