by Zero_Nullnix
the best story, I have read on the site, Simply Perfect.
The only bad thing, it ended soon and I will have to wait for the next part. PLease dont do this to your readers. You literly made me like an addict to your writing and now waiting for the next part is getting really raelly difficult.
Please Mercy :)
Don't panic! There is more to come, but I accidentally edited out my "to be continued" note at the end of ch.2.
Apologies, people.
Loved your intense descriptions, Is this something you are personnally aware of or just a fetish>? You don't have to answer, I was just curious. Good Job!
Zero: I tried to give you a five on this wonderful story but nothing happened when I clicked on it. Tell the web master about it so it can be fixed. This is a fabulous story (chapter one is one of the finest stories on the web, this one is good too) and I hope you continue with some more chapters. AnHoa Rifleman
This is delicious. A thoroughly well developed story, hot and exciting without degenerating into a sordid fuck-fest. This is one of the best on the site and I really do look forward to more of the same quality. Like I said, "Wow"
Hello,
This story is so well written; the steady development of this taboo relationship, the building of erotic tension, the exploration of turbulent emotions. This story is at the same level as some of the best stories by 'always wanted to'. Definitely the Major Leagues!
Please keep it up.
A very slow build-up and I hope that he gets to fuck his mom in the next chapter.
I think it's going to be very hard for her to love two men, especially with her son sexually satisfying her the way he can.
Hope to see the next chapter soon.
Thanks to all for your comments and feedback.
Part 3 is nearly ready. Please bear with me if it takes a few more days. I received many requests for part 2 to be added quickly and I feel that I rushed it a little. I want to take more care with the quality of part 3, so it may mean a couple more days of proofreading and revising.
I'm sincerely grateful for your interest.
I love the slow build up. Pretty rare to see romance lol
Can't wait for part 3!
Hi all,
Many thanks for your support for 'Appreciating Mother'.
I have uploaded chapter 3 today. It will appear when Literotica has processed it - usually a few days.
Zero
There can be no sharing a woman between two guys. Ever. That is revolting. The dad needs to lose his interest in sex completely, or die, or leave, or something that removes him from the picture. Or the son can be killed instead, or lose his sex drive, or leave. Either one would be fine. Sexual relationships have no room for more than 2 people. Please fix this. The mere thought of a woman sharing her body with more than one guy, no matter who it is, is repugnant.
in the magnificent chapter 2. After reading how mom swallowed every drop & how lucky Andrew gave mom her greatest orgasm with his mouth & tongue I had to stop. Something came 'up' that I had to take care of, neither "mom" or my wife were around so it was a 'DIY' hand job. I wasn't "in love" with mom but I sure wanted her since I was 14 and saw all the pictures dad had of her doing all kinds of things with another couple, they were swingers. Mom ate pussy,sucked cock and dad had those spectacular shots of mom. A small collection of cum filled open mouth shots that I jerked off to hundreds of times wishing it was my cock mom was sucking. I LOVE this awesome story. LT
As I wrote in part 1, "You writing is amazing. I love the slow build up,the sexual tension, and the romance. Especially the romance. To me, that is what separates the superb stories from the chaff. Thank you, thank you, thank you!". This only gets better.
Truly outstanding, sensually erotic and intimate love story. I especially enjoy stories where the characters are emotionally and psychologically mature with solid sense of self, self-worth, ego and id. Each accept and recognizes the love, safety and security of their sexual union. Each recognizes that sex is how the human truly expresses their deepest love and affection for another person. Likewise, each accepts the limitations thieir sexual union have, to wit: the father. 5 stars.