All Comments on 'April in Texas Ch. 09'

by SLC-Ohio

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MacDukeMacDukeover 17 years ago
Travelogue

S, the rating is not for the lack of sex, but for the inanity of this chapter to the narrative thrust of your story. This may have all happened exactly as you report it, but your story is about the evolution of your relationship on the road. Other than establishing that you are a wine snob, and that nuclear energy is one of your personal no-no's, this chapter adds nothing whatsoever to your story of love and sex with your husband.

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